[HCoop-Misc] Ragingwire Telecommunications

Nathan Kennedy ntk at hcoop.net
Sun Jan 27 00:14:16 EST 2008


> On Fri, 2008-01-25 at 13:59 -0500, Nathan Kennedy wrote:
> This is well-written if a bit long. Big blocks of text turn readers off,
> especially if you're giving them an earful. I think you should ream
> their asses for half a page or less.

You are right.  I think I will just cut out half of the sentences at
random and send it in.

-ntk




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