[HCoop-Discuss] local advocacy

[Davor Ocelic]

On Sun, 27 Apr 2008 09:59:16 +1000
"David Crawshaw" <crawshaw at hcoop.net> wrote:

> I hang around a university campus, and was thinking of putting up some
> posters advertising hcoop. My first stab at a poster is based on the
> main website.
> 
> http://www.hcoop.net/~crawshaw/hcoop-a4.pdf

Cool stuff David, here's what I first thought of it:

Things like board of directors should not be the first bullet.

How about rearranging the stuff to display technical features first,
and then eventually list security, democracy and split cost as last
three items.

Something like (the order of bullets):

- technical features: ... list some stuff we have explicitly by name
(that will provide enough text to fill a bullet)
- for power users..
- security 
- benefits of pro hosting
- democratic
- split cost

Of course that's a suggestion if we're putting technical stuff first.

Even if not, if you want to keep it the way it is, the first bullet
should be either moved somewhere down or re-worded.

Also, when you mention we split costs equally, put a "non-profit" 
somewhere to be clear about it.. Otherwise it's not clear which
cost we're splitting to begin with.

See ya,
-doc