One minor point: In this reply, "he should follow the directions" is not gender neutral, so "they" or "he/she" would be better, as we don't want to say that we are a male only outfit, right?
I didn't notice any other similar, but that was the one that now caught my eye. 

-- Adam Chlipala <adamc@hcoop.net> wrote:
Here are my revisions to the interview answers I posted earlier, based 
on feedback so far.  I still plan to send off the official answers by 
early Monday.

=> 5.) Is there anything else you would like to add? :-)

First, that all of the answers I've given here should be findable on our
web site/wiki by interested potential members.  If anyone has any
questions left after poking around starting at http://hcoop.net/ , he
should follow the directions in our prospective member FAQ there for
letting us know, so that we can include answers for future visitors' 
benefit!